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This was the very first page of my comic I quite like the comparsion and the shapes of the space ship in relation to the Rabbits ears. 

 

Another successful comic book has to be Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles also a black and white book and with or without shading noir art really does work well in many realms a bit like original television was in black and white there is something more real than adding a lot of colour but most comics have a colour cover and are now done on computer graphics and I really feel that pen and ink really has it’s place for feel and overall appeal. 

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Hey Chris, 

Fun work. Keep making those minis, and also as you develop, keep working on the anatomy and stylization of your characters, and the layouts and backgrounds of your panels.
But you’re on the way with it all! 

Awesome, Chris 

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Chris Staros
Top Shelf Productions
c/o Idea & Design Works, LLC 2765 Truxtun Road
San Diego, CA 92106
USA 

Hi Chris, 

The comic is looking really good. I can see how your style has developed and improved over the past few years. It’s great that you’re using colour too. I’ll look forward to seeing the final thing. 

- [ ] ThThe main characters are vampire1 Rotten Count the father to GRENDA - [ ] Vampire2 GRENDA Rotten Counts daughter
- [ ] ThThree bat bunnies Jeffff, Norman and Gemma
- [ ] 2 Garlic Lords the deadly duo, Garlic Loaf and Garlic Butter 

- [ ] Unseen characters are the vampire colony on the vampire home planet which is called WELL 

- [ ] Comic about war and being held prisoner, hostage and how stupid and useless it is even on a small scale even as simple as having a reaction to garlic being a vampire! 

- [ ] EVIL GARLIC KING’S Dying wish to have GRENDA held captive in the tall tower so his pet slime obeyed his order and once she was missing and the king died she was then held hostage by the evil slime until she was found by her father and rescued by the Bat Bunnies only to have been turned into a garlic lord enemy to inform the lords where the home planet is of the vampires called WELL 

- [ ] ThThe garlic lords want to destroy the last existing vampire colony on the peaceful planet called WELL, by landing on the planet and poisoning the vampire with their garlic gas but the plans won’t go ahead until the garlic crusher on the battle ship starts working again so can GRENDA pull herself out of the evil curse set up by the dead king of planet FALLEN when she was put in the tall tower as a hostage and morph back into a vampire again giv- ing her bat wings so that she can flfly ahead and warn her people that an attack is coming, but as she has also been cursed to be a Garlic Perssonel she has got to fifind her way back to being a vampire bat one of her morphs is leftft so will she pick just the right time to change then to rewire the cannon the enemy are going to use on the planet Well (the vampires home) and blow up the ship and save the day and still get out the air-lock to safety, there is only one colony of vampires with only 8 in total including GRENDA 

- [ ] GRENDA (Rotten Counts daughter) stops the GL by turning into a bat and gnawing her way through the battle ship’s internal ignition high in the ceiling of the main room
of the ship then when the GL aren’t looking as they are so annoyed GRENDA escapes through the air-lock leaving the Garlic Lords to be consumed by their own gas so she saves the day. 

- [ ] COMIC FOR FINAL MAJOR PROJECT MARCH 1st 2020 - DEADLINE MAY 2021 

- [ ] HARRY “We’re not putting up with it anymore.” We all live forever and a day so lets go back home to our planet.” 

- [ ] HARRY: “ThThey’re just like ghosts you can’t kill them but they can put a spell on anyone they don’t like!” 

- [ ] ThThe vampires are a dying breed but are no longer blood sucking animals and as they defeated the evil king where gren was held captive they thought they had wiped out all enemies and on a safe rescue of princess GRENDA were free from all foes// past battles list them for the bunnies to say when they come round from their trance 

- [ ] ThThe vampires inc bunnies are on the run from the garlic beings but now Rot- ten Count flflies home instead of saving his daughter and leads the garlic lords right to the vampire colony. ThThe deadly duo/garlic lords are taking over to get rid of the vampires but the vampires don’t drink blood anymore but are killed ver easily by the garlic beings that morph into human bodies and it became to dangerous for the vampires to suck blood but they still live forever unless a cross, a steak or a garlic being kills them and including the bunnies are down to four in total as the vampire that flflies the ship lost his wife to the garlic queen... 

- [ ] ThThe ship breaks so the vampires turn into bats and flfly towards the evil kings castle to feast on royal blood the end 

- [ ] Ship gets struck by lightening on the way up into space?
- [ ] Slime is called evil glue and the princess is stuck to the back of the tall tower door ever since she tried to escape, the slime stuck her there as a bargaining
chip for a billion pounds that the lard king wanted from the vampire lord but he refused to pat it all this over a falling out over the princess not marrying the lard kings son and having her fangs removed not pleasing to the princess or her father Rotten Count. 

- [ ] Gthe vamps daughter is carrying the key to the family home front door which is locked so the 4 of them have been tracking gren now that she has turned into
a garlic bat monster and has residence with the garlic ship she is the 4 s enemy and she won’t give the key back as long as she is alive, the 4 vampires can’t kill the garlic monsters and there is many of them on the battle space ship and they want to colonise and grow their kind so the 4 is the last hope of restoring human and alien kind alike in the many worlds in space.... 

Crit and context of your project, Mine is a comic about being wrong and at odds with different species from a vampires point of view and looking at how other illustrators do their art I have included TMNT and Bone
as inspirations, both early issues were done in pen and ink. The trans- formations in my work has a much more character based type of story rather than a single concept but artists such as 

The target audience would be 15+
Progression of work colour experiments page by page the story develops and I am always keen to keep it interesting and set a good pace from the start.
The important things was all the drawing from roughs to finished work and there has definitely been a development with this aspect. Techniques Penciling and pen and ink.
A pitch as a sketch book drawings part of this is sketches from my sketchbook.
Practical only drawings and screen shots done.
Character development, mine is through the story and by keeping the art consistent introductions, similarities and differences between the different monsters.